I Promise

mm By in
10 comments

I promise to show you,
Places unseen,
Take you to the cities,
Where you have not been.

I promise the weather,
Will be different every time,
Winter to spring to summer,
You will not miss rain or sunshine.

I promise to explain,
the sides – good and bad,
But, Make your own judgement,
Don’t just nod along and be glad.

I promise to tell you,
Secrets of people,
How they handle love and fear,
And overcome their own struggle.

I promise to share,
My abundance knowledge,
I will give you,
All I have, without any nudge.

I promise to tell,
Stories when you can’t sleep,
You may smile, cry, shocked with fear,
It is just a disclaimer.

I promise to paint,
A picture, like a play on stage,
New colours will be added,
Every time you turn a page.

I promise to keep you company,
No matter where you go,
Like a faithful friend,
Your trust, I will never blow.

 

10 comments on “I Promise”

    • Ve
    • June 1, 2017
    Reply

    I love its rhyme! Brilliant!

    1. mm
      • Manisha Awasthi
      • June 1, 2017
      Reply

      Thank you 🙂

    • Asha
    • June 1, 2017
    Reply

    The depth of commitment in your promises is very clear. It’s so interesting that you chose to present in this format. Is this a style that you especially like?

    1. mm
      • Manisha Awasthi
      • June 1, 2017
      Reply

      Thanks for dropping by Asha. Glad you liked it. I wanted to write a poem from an object’s point of view and being a book-lover, I chose that object to be book .

  1. Reply

    Promise of a mother is always honored and cherished.I especially liked “make your own judgement”

    1. mm
      • Manisha Awasthi
      • June 6, 2017
      Reply

      Thanks for dropping by Sara. This poem was from a book’s POV but now after your comment, I think, this poem can be from a mother too. 🙂

    • Nate
    • June 2, 2017
    Reply

    I didn’t catch that these stanzas were from the POV of a book until I read your comment to Asha. Perhaps the title could suggest it, or the photo could be more clearly of a book? Once I reread, I appreciated the voice of the poem. I like the idea that books know their own worth and are able to communicate it with their readers. I struggled to find a scansion pattern in the poem. That might have been a stylistic choice, but, generally, poems with rhyme have scansion.

    1. mm
      • Manisha Awasthi
      • June 6, 2017
      Reply

      Thanks for your feedback Nate. I agree, there could had been a better picture but I left it to reader’s imagination as I tagged the post under ‘Books’ 😉 But that didn’t help for sure.

    • Kalpana Solsi
    • June 3, 2017
    Reply

    It is a very unique idea to present the poem from the book’s point of view. Usually books are portrayed as lifeless objects.
    One can write this in prose detailing it further.

    1. mm
      • Manisha Awasthi
      • June 6, 2017
      Reply

      Very true Kalpana. This piece can be further written in more detailed prose.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

CommentLuv badge